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on Feb 8th, 2008Friday 55 Number 2

old friends they were ten
years ago it was in
high school they met in
high school did they know
each other ten years ago
it was when they drifted
apart not since then did
they talk not since then
had they seen each other
shocked she was when he
shot her………………….
……….with his camera

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7 Responses to “Friday 55 Number 2”

  1. # Little Wingon 08 Feb 2008 at 2:47 pm

    Excellent 55, Jared!
    Loved what you did with it!
    Mines up!

  2. # Strumpeton 08 Feb 2008 at 3:02 pm

    I love, love, love it, Sir It.

    It has this…..flow….

    which makes it quite simply….glow.

    xoxo

  3. # jaredrbyeron 08 Feb 2008 at 3:27 pm

    Thanks Little Wing, Thanks Strumpet. I wrote this real quick in about 2 minutes before my European Economic History Class started.

  4. # G-Manon 09 Feb 2008 at 9:01 am

    Sounds like you went to your 10 year class reunion..hehehe
    Anyway Jared, I’ve found that the best 55’s are indeed written with speed and a fleeting thought!
    You are doing a wonderful job here, keep it up, and thanks for playing…Galen

  5. # jaredrbyeron 09 Feb 2008 at 10:58 am

    Actually I didn’t do that either. I did run into someone I went to HS with on myspace. That sort of inspired me I guess.

  6. # monaon 10 Feb 2008 at 8:06 am

    That does happen all too often…
    You run into someone from the past, someone you knew so well then & then you realize that so much time has elapsed in between that you are actually confronting a stranger…

    Excellent 55

  7. # jaredrbyeron 10 Feb 2008 at 11:52 am

    Thanks for coming by Mona. Thanks for the compliment. Sometimes I always feel like a stranger so it isn’t too odd for me.

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